

[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2009 06:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Her story really had me all but in tears, yet I believe Zack was right about not blowing her cover, ever - if possible. It's ensuring everyone's safety eventually; and she doesn't have to be "lost and lonely" either just because she won't give up her terrifically created identity. Zack would be proud on end if he knew.
Also, it was pretty smart to make up two cover stories at the same time in order to have a refuge if anything should ever go wrong.
I'm sure she'll make the right call and find her way in the end!
Very well done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the wonderful review! I've always loved Asha-is-Jondy theories.