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Reviewer: Shay Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 09:51 PM Title: Guilty

So, introducing what's happening and how Max ended up in the later installments, is that it? *nods* Gotcha.

Anyway the last bit would have already made quite an impact on its own. I found the the tone and circumstances quite heartbreaking. Nice work.

Reviewer: Maia Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2011 07:19 AM Title: Guilty

Nice, totally did not see the Ray thing coming. Well done.

Reviewer: SkylarGrace Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2010 08:24 PM Title: Guilty

Awww, that's heartbreaking! :D

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words! There is more (oh, so much more) planned and plotted. Watch this space for a multi-chaptered response :)

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