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Reviewer: Shay Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 10:38 AM Title: we don't have a choice, anymore anyway...

Wow. That was just... wow. Amazing stuff.

Poor Keegan, sure, but I felt more for her daughter and mate left behind - we saw Felix mourning, after all, and Chloe was rendered motherless. *sigh*

I love how abruptly things happened and how sharp the emotions and reactions seemed to feel as a result. Nice work hon!

(Ps. Tried to listen to Mudvayne but it's a little too hard for me, sorry :) The lyrics were cool, though.) 

Reviewer: NimmyLadyGwen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 10:05 AM Title: we don't have a choice, anymore anyway...

Wooo great story!! Poor Keegan... :(

Reviewer: SkylarGrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:42 AM Title: we don't have a choice, anymore anyway...

*smooshes* THIS WAS BRILLIANT!!!!

Nothing else needs to be said! :D 

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