That....was one long ass story. And totally worth the read. Incredible job, m'dear!

Hey, there. Wow, I finished. That is one long story. My favourite kind, of course :D.

So much to comment on. I should have reviewed on a chapter basis, but then, I did not want to stop reading. So you see, it's all your fault, really.

This is a really cool and neatly elaborated 'verse. Seriously, you did a great job at fitting in all the pieces, intertwinning all the trails, leaving no loose ends.. You also did a wonderful job on the characterization, giving them all distinct and individual personalities (not easy as the story moved on and more and more characters kept getting added). Dean and Alec's sibling/parental/alpha/pack relationship is wonderfully intricate and layered. Keegan is a really interesting addition and the mix of transgenic abilities and supernatural ones is well done. I like that you added so many different elements and meshed them all (angels and demons, fey, transgenics, humans, familiars, military, civillian..).

I am a bit intrigued by Max's role in the whole thing. At some points she was more central to the story, at others she seemed to take a back seat. She is the only character I felt you did not know what to do with. (and please let me clarify this is just *my* feeling, I am sure you did; she just feels kind of adrift to me, compared with the sense of purpose I get from the other characters, even secondary ones)

The action sequences were fun and fast paced and the otherworldly elements fit well in and you did a great job at having the characters express the weirdness and frustration at them.

I'd suggest to pay more attention to "your/you're" as this is seems to be the only consistently incorrecuse of grammar throughout the chapters.

All in all, a wonderful story, well told, great characters and a pleasure to read.

Thank you for sharing this universe with us and for taking the time to write it.

Maia.