Reviews For Perspective
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Reviewer: Maia Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 01:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, what a nice story. It is indeed all in one's perspective.

Good job getting into his 11yo mind. 

Thanks for sharing.

Maia.

Reviewer: Twinchy Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 09:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very well done, Vilnolin.

This was awesome and reflected perfectly the matter of perspective for the 'common' population (and even Manticore's employees) in contrast to those 'rejected' transgenics.

I love your well-chosen scene for how it unfolded to revealing what happened to the reader, putting them in the same place as the X5s, driving the point home even better.

It also did a good job of conclusively stating how the whole escape and reindoctrination drove a spike of mistrust and anger between the transgenics, aiding in keeping the kids under control in the future.

Reviewer: SkylarGrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 06:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was fantastic!!! I could totally see this as canon! :D

Reviewer: ameliakate Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 01:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

was so going to write this and changed my mind :p well not this but 494 in ops, glad to see someone elses take, great work! Loved the story!

Reviewer: Shay Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2010 07:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh Wow. I loved that!

So, reindoc was over due to the Pulse. What a treat! (Or, I can see it being a date to revere in the minds of those who saw it as a release from a torturous existence!)

Well done and thanks for sharing!

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