Date: 26 May 2010 01:10 PM Title: Johnny Kick A Hole In The Sky
oooh, nicely done.
You did great with the characterization, it was aparent from the first few words. And it's a great explanation.
Nice job!
Maia.
Date: 20 May 2010 01:42 AM Title: Johnny Kick A Hole In The Sky
nice outtake! kinda love it!
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2010 09:27 PM Title: Johnny Kick A Hole In The Sky
What a great idea, making use of the loss of information for starting out life new! Such an 'Ames' thing to do if you asked me - and he probably wasn't the only one to pull this stunt...
I also really adore your characterization, OBC. Not only of White's but also of the other people around him.
Imaginative background story.
Date: 08 May 2010 12:02 AM Title: Johnny Kick A Hole In The Sky
Another wonderful story=) And now my muse is making me feel guilty for not submitting anything for so long...
Author's Response: Aww, don't feel guilty, Muse - feel inspired! (hopefully to finish Intriguing Situation...) Thanks for your review, hope to see you writing again soon.
Date: 07 May 2010 08:19 AM Title: Johnny Kick A Hole In The Sky
Oh that was brilliant! What an awesome cover for a man desperate to shed his past. I hadn't ever really thought about the positie side of the Pulse.
Nicely done, hon! *smishes you*
Author's Response: Thanks sweetie! I've always wondered how Ames dropped the Sandeman bit. As soon as I saw this challenge, I could picture the scene so clearly, I *had* to write it.
So you're going to bug me for background stories, huh? You keep sending the prompts, and I'll keep (trying!) to write them!!