Date: 23 Oct 2012 09:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really like this story!
I hope that you will write more to it. I think that you could keep going with it. Please update this soon!!
Date: 22 Jul 2010 07:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
“After all, this had only been the ...what? fifth? sixth? time today. He shook his head sadly. Really! You’d think they’d be more subtle... or at least more original.”
What do you think, maybe “Nice shoes. Wanna fuck?” Nothing beats the classics.
Zack only frowned. “You came back early. What happened?”
“Geez, did it ever occur to that I might miss you, sunshine?
HAH!
Max laughed and then looked at him. Really looked at him. A muscular, sleek man, standing glorious in the middle of this swamp, wearing nothing but a dead snake in his hands and she said the only thing that came to mind. “Yummy.”
Nice!
Zack is starting to creep me out a bit. Why do they hang with them when they can get their own place and just like, fuck all the time?
Author's Response:
LOL! Such a scar comment. Well, if they did... you'd have nothing to protest about, now.. right? ;-). It's my fault, really. I got rid of Logan here, needed an excuse for them to go on missions... now I have a new and improved EO.
Thanks for the review!
Maia.