Reviews For Back to Basics
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Reviewer: scarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 06:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

“The beeper went off again and Alec briefly wondered why the image of a large squirrel suddenly crossed his mind.”

Old school! Good times.

““Are you decent?” If the guy was half dressed, Alec would blurr out of there. To hell with protecting Max. Even he had his limits!

That’s just gross to even contemplate!

“‘Hey, Alec, could you do me a favor? – Sure Logan. – Thanks, Alec. – No problem, Logan.’ Apparently, Logan had missed the politeness classes in his pre-pulse boarding school.”

I’m so happy right now.

She called him ‘my Alec.’!! I’m half excited, and half wanting to fight her for him.

When I got to the feeding thing, I burst out laughing:

“He doubted she could go unnoticed anywhere. Especially since he had started feeding her.

He smiled slightly. It was his current project: Feed Max. He had started on the island, and kept finding excuses to make her eat more and more. She was naturally thin, but a few pounds wouldn’t hurt her.”

Excellent and awesome.

I love that he took a magazine out on the obstacle course! Oh, Alec. He’s having a hilarious amount of fun, I love it.

Nice! I love a Max and Alec fight.

“Argh! You wouldn’t believe how boooooooring the whole thing was! I almost died in there.”

Maybe this is why I bond with Alec so much, I hate being bored too.

Author's Response:

Hee! squirrels... good times.

This one was a ton of fun. The Max Alec fight was one of my first "action" scenes, and though far from perfect, I was happy I was able to able to somewhat pull it off :D

Your comments are always valued, so thanks again for the lovely reviews.

Maia.

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