Date: 22 Jul 2010 03:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
“Alec, ready to take his next shot, casually commented, “Batteries must be coming damaged lately… I mean, didn’t you change them last week?””
I love how he never makes it easy. So fun.
God, that Eyes Only third person bull shit is so fucking annoying, but you make fun of it brilliantly. Love!
““Of course not, Logan, don’t worry. The thought of you having fun never even crossed my mind!”
I totally snickered.
Okay, the Spanish? You are such a cheater, you Spanish speaker.
“Alec had been responsible for their seating arrangements, arguing that helicopter rides were bumpy and they couldn’t risk Max and Logan accidentally touching, could they? Of course, sitting across the width of the Huey made any kind of conversation with Logan virtually impossible. Max had a very strong suspicion that had been exactly Alec’s goal. But she didn’t mind. Alec’s happy yapping versus Logan’s outraged corruption stories? Yep. She didn’t mind at all.”
Who would? But I love Alec’s yapping.
“Suddenly, having to sleep in the same room, which had been so appealing in the afternoon, was something he dreaded.”
I love how it tortures him. Things are heating up, yay!!
God, Logan's a moron. Ugh.
Author's Response:
"I love how it tortures him." Well, had to make him suffer somewhat... he's too darn perfect, isn't he? ;-)
Thanks for reviewing, scar.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 07:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, we've got Logan a bit "indisposed", the bad side of of the trip while Max and Alec got to enjoy the finer sides. Not too many objections there, though I felt a bit sorry for the guy, I'm glad Alec and Max got lots of alone time.. Yay! I should be sleeping but I just couldn't resist reading this sequel, hehe... Glad that I decided to do it now =).
Author's Response:
I am really, really mean to poor Logan in this series. But then, most of the characters' traits are a bit... exaggerated. It's what made the stories fun to write at the time.
I'm glad you feel it was worth staying up to read :D.
Thanks for the comments,
Maia.