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Reviewer: scarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 03:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

“You know, I’ve got to hand it to OC, she can really work miracles.” he continued, looking her up and down and laughing when she had to stop her attempt at hitting him, because the dress was way too low-cut for such sudden movements.

Hah, nice.

“Alec was really reluctant at the idea of touching Logan in any way, even repulsed one might say. But right now he felt an uncontrollable urge to put his hands around the older man’s neck and squeeze slowly but firmly. He’d felt that way all afternoon.”

All afternoon? Oh, the hardship! I’ve felt that way for like a decade!

“He had used a couple of his lines and smiles and got himself a date for the affair. “

That would totally work on me too. Cause of how he’s ridiculously hot. Poor girl is only human.

“So Logan, sorry about that. I just needed to get their attention.” Alec said, his tone totally denying any regret, but that went completely unnoticed by Logan.

“Yes, Alec. I realized what you were doing right away, and so I played along.”

--Classic.

I like how he ‘rescued’ her from having to play the hot girl. Awww.

Reviewer: Insomnia Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2010 07:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

“Well, it really brought out her…” he raised his hands in front of his chest with a mischievous glint  “…eyes”

-Hahaha, Alec doesn't quit even when it comes to dear ol' Maxie. Sweet story, nice to know Alec's got her back no matter what.



Author's Response:

No, he never does. In this series? Regular Knight in Shining Armour.

Thanks again for reading and for letting me know what you think!

 

Reviewer: Kim Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 01:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it!  I'm really loving having your stories posted here, reminds me of the 'good ol' days'.  Well done on the sewerage jargon, absolute genius!

Author's Response:

Hee! I loved that part back in the day.

 Glad you liked it and thanks for reading!

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