Date: 06 Feb 2010 06:29 PM Title: Damaged Goods
Nice story. It makes sense, all that probing could not have been good... And I like that it fits with the show we saw. This could have happened in between the story we saw, and it would make sense.
Nice job. Thanks for sharing.
Maia.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I'm sorry that it's taken me so long to answer your review. I had some serious computer problems and wound up having to wipe the operating system. Most of my time lately has been taken up by trying to reinstall everything.
I'm so glad that you enjoyed "Damaged Goods," and that you thought it fit into the DA universe! I really had fun writing it. :)
Thank you again!
Take care and God bless!
-Laughter
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2010 11:48 AM Title: Damaged Goods
Awww. Poor boy, and I love that she tries to be sincere, but he knows her well enough to know she's only trying to cover up that she was about to yell at him.
You know you have to continue this right? That much torture needs to be explored.
Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!
Lol, Alec really does know Max well. She just doesn't do genuine concern without proof that he deserves it, lol. Ridicule comes much easier. ;)
I have to admit that I don't really have any plans to continue this, but I will definitely have to see where inspiration leads. :)
Thank you again! Take care and God bless!