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Reviewer: Insomnia Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2009 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

As Alec was wondering, I, myself kept on worrying if it was something terrible going on, especially with Max doing it so often and so late, with her clothes dirty.. But finding out that she went to go to the Manticore place left me suprised but at the same time not at all suprised.

What is the reason to why she did not tell him and so many other questions left me wondering for an update... please.

Reviewer: SkylarGrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2009 05:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

I agree, that was beautifully written and I can't wait to see what else you come up with because I'm sure it's gonna be fantastic. An update soon would be just fantastic *grins*

Reviewer: LaughtersMelody Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2009 09:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was great! :) Wonderfully written as always. I love the way you portray Alec and Max's relationship, and I love that Max is going back to Manticore.  It really does make you wonder why.  Will there be more?  Please?  *is hopeful*

Reviewer: OneBadCat Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2009 02:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow... no words...

That is so powerful, so evocative - so flipping beautiful!! And I have to wait for more? No fair!!

Please write quick...
-- sits back, watching the clock! --

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