Date: 13 Nov 2009 08:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was hilarious! And the line about looking nonchalant while scouting the perimeter...yeah I could just see Mole cycling around on a bicycle all merrylike with the ever-present cigar. Um...maybe not, lol. I love reading stories that feature friendly, sarcasm-lined comradarie moments between Alec and Mole. They get along so well together. You probably could have even fleshed the whole scene out to a full-fledged oneshot! I wouldn't have complained, lol. Good job.
Date: 02 Nov 2009 03:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
I *knew* it was Mole as soon as the words X-freaks were uttered! Cool fic.
Date: 02 Nov 2009 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
*bursts into giggles* Oh my gosh, MOLE!!! He would look pretty darn funny, especially if the bike had those nice, pom-pom streamers... *snickers* The entire mental image of Mole learning to bike is hilarious. ^_^ Very funny, thanks for sharing!
Date: 31 Oct 2009 07:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic!! Much giggles - well done!
Date: 31 Oct 2009 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
"I mean, do you know how ridiculous I look?”
Alec stepped back and observed the scene before him, good point.
Just the thought of Mole riding a bike... *falls over laughing*
“Just shut up princess and don’t let go until I tell you to okay.”
LOL. I love how Mole manages to sound insulting, demanding, and nervous all at once, lol! *grins*
Amazing work!!! :D
Date: 30 Oct 2009 04:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, honey, I adored this! Amusing to imagine a transhuman learning to ride a bike, and doubly so to discover that it was Mole!
It's been so long since I've readanything by you - or seen anything new from you, period! - so I feel really special and super excited (and yes, a little over-caffeinated!)
I've missed you, E! Hope things are going well with and for you. Please send my best to your mum, too. It's been a while! *hugs* Drop me a line sometime, yeah? And who knows, maybe we'll see more of you in the coming months - I'm a big fan of drabbles these days... *hinthint* :D
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, trying to get back into a little fanfic. Who knows where it will lead. Little nervous about my next venture though!
Oh, mom says hi#! - "That Shay was such a nice girl! Good taste in hats if I recall." - Direct quote, I swear!