Date: 02 Nov 2009 03:33 PM Title: Chapter 11: Extras(not to be judged with story)
The first made me laugh, Alec and Max being nice towards each other, baffling Normal. The second made me go all aww... Finally. And I liked the number 946, yeah. The third just made me laugh even harder, seriously those two sentences were enough to know what was going on, hah.
I like all three of them. Thanks for not helping yourself =).
Date: 02 Nov 2009 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 10: Max
Lol, it seemed that Rafer's attempts have been thwarted; Max doesn't seem to care much for him. ^_~ Great drabbles, very enjoyable!
Date: 02 Nov 2009 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 9: Alec
I like how playful Alec is even though he's pretty annoyed. I can't believe Rafer's being a jerk; I'm disappointed in him. :(
Date: 02 Nov 2009 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 8: Syl
Wasn't expectig Syl! It always surprised me that the 09ers didn't really show up much in Season 2; I thought they would play a more prominent role...Maybe they were just too busy hiding? Ah, and Alec's on the offensive.
Date: 02 Nov 2009 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 7: Bling
I like how Bling's little protective of Max, but he knows Alec has this under control. I always did like Bling. He was a very steady, level-headed character.
Date: 02 Nov 2009 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 6: Logan
Aw. I sort of feel bad for Logan, but I guess he's doing the right thing. Best not to torture himself.
Date: 02 Nov 2009 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 5: Sketchy
Transgenics hustling pool, that'd be something to see. I really like how you're telling the story through glimpses from everyone's POV. Very awesome. ^_^
Date: 02 Nov 2009 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 4: Asha
-_- Oh, Asha. I feel bad for her. At least she's a determined person. I like how you wrote her, it was very in-character, or at least I think so! Nice job!
Date: 02 Nov 2009 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 3: OC
Clever OC, possibly hoping to difuse the situation and avoid a fist-fight. And yep, she's right, Alec would win. :)
Date: 01 Nov 2009 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 2: Rafer
Rafer was such a cutie. He didn't really belong with Max in the long run, but he was likeable. Nice to see him pop back up! ^_^
Date: 01 Nov 2009 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Barkeeper
Lol, yay for barkeepers! I like that it's a watered-down beer; nice way to cheat people. ^_^
Author's Response: it's the way of the down trotted world, have to make the money somehow :P
Date: 01 Nov 2009 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 11: Extras(not to be judged with story)
Hehehe.
I already told you what I thought about these, but let me say it again.
Joshua -
I love Joshua. He's so sweet and gentle and he cares greatly for his 'family'. Sweet way to interpret the painting (and number).
Dr. Carr -
Dude, if they're already together why not just let them get it on?! *whines* Fine, fine. I suppose the whole having kids thing might not be on the agenda for them right n ow *sigh* Well, in anycase, made me laugh to think of the Doc worrying about end of the world scenarios only to be confronted by a couple of super-horny Transgenics :D
Date: 01 Nov 2009 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 10: Max
Great end to a fun scene (as seen through the many, various eyes!) What better way than to top it up by putting their skills to good use and having a blast doing it? I missed the old Max - thanks for bringing her back :D
Ame, it was great to see you answer a prompt! I hope it won't be months before you consider doing so again!
Thanks for sharing!
Date: 01 Nov 2009 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 9: Alec
Intimidation tactics. *laughs* Good old Alec! Doesn't even need to say anything to get that across :)
Love the silent communication that says so much more than the actual words they exchange :)
Date: 01 Nov 2009 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 8: Syl
Aw, gotta love the big sis looking out for the baby sibling :) Guess it's a good thing I wasn't there instead. If I'd seen Alec sitting ther and not sticking up for his girl, I'da gone and stolen him :P
Date: 01 Nov 2009 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 7: Bling
LOL! I can even picture Bling's smile as he takes it all in :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I miss him, I think he might be one of my all time fave's. a male version of OC sometimes.
Date: 01 Nov 2009 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 6: Logan
Oh, Logie! Don't be all huffy and stuffy! She moved on, you can't touch, it was doomed from the moment Max returned. *pats dejected cyberhacker on back* Your jealousy, dear man, I completely understand. It's Alec, after all!
Really, just leave them be. It's Alec's turn to play protector, confidante and jealous boyfriend :D
Date: 01 Nov 2009 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 5: Sketchy
Aw, Sketchy's not just working off stoner logic here! (I hate how they practically turned Sketch into super-idiot in season 2. He may not always have been "with it" but he was actually pretty intelligent when he had a topic he knew something about, you know? *sigh* I'll leave my rant about DA ruining things in s2 for another time)
Anyway, it's nice when he's observant, and I like seeing him happy, hanging with the crew.
Though, curious... After all the man was slime. Were you refering to Rafer or was it someone new?
Author's Response:
I know what you mean, some of my favorite stories of late have been Sketchy being smarter then s2 gave him credit for. Actually a great story over on ff.net that has him figuring out just what Alec is well before Alec tells him and just playing along. I feel in love. But enough of my rambling....
But yes he was talking about Rafer, I could have used his name but well I didn't lol. But he's definatly disliking Rafer. And I'm so not sure if Rafer and Asha would work out, her with the S1W and him with...his ego. *chuckles*
Date: 01 Nov 2009 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 4: Asha
Poor Asha. She really seems to like Logan but he's completley oblivious.
Though, to be perfectly honest, I think the girl needs to grow a spine (here) and move on. Guys who are hung up on other girls are a waste of time and energy and will only lead to heartache. (Did anyone ever consider fixing Rafer up with Asha? :P Just a thought!)
Date: 01 Nov 2009 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 3: OC
I love Original Cindy. She's such a cool character. And perceptive. Understanding. And a little bit evil :)
Date: 01 Nov 2009 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 2: Rafer
So, he's not entirely happy with Max's attention being monopolized by our boy. Making a play for Max's affections here is kinda funny...and sad. Boy's so gonna strike out :) (and lose all that money!)
Date: 01 Nov 2009 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Barkeeper
Gotta love the gossipmongering barkeep :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2009 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 11: Extras(not to be judged with story)
Hahaha!!! That's hilarious. The first chapter is very sweet but those added extras just made it hilarious!!! Carr's point of view was just the perfect ending :D