Date: 13 Nov 2009 08:45 PM Title: Men and Sports
Uh oh, Logan and Alec watching football together... Everyone run for the hills! lol. Just kidding. I can honestly sympathize with Max. What woman in her right mind willingly sits in on a pro sports TV game with the important men in her life, lol? And survives the experience without pulling her hair out? I loved the back and forth dialogue between Alec and Logan. Max looking on as the two argued, with them completely ignoring her. Very believable and very funny. Excellent.
Date: 01 Nov 2009 11:39 PM Title: Men and Sports
its like watching a game with my room mates :) adorable! great good.
Date: 27 Oct 2009 02:41 PM Title: Men and Sports
I'm so with Max on this one, especially since the football games and then the baseball games are messing with the rest of the TV schedule... I love the dialogue in this story! I think you did a great job with the characters, they're perfect. Awesome job!
Date: 26 Oct 2009 08:59 AM Title: Men and Sports
Love it!! Big giggles, nice little light-comedy piece. Thanks for posting.
Date: 24 Oct 2009 01:36 PM Title: Men and Sports
Oh, shygirl... *laughs* That was cute!
I always enjoy your writing, and as I told you already, especially pieces that include dialogue. I've said it before and I'll say it a hundred times more, your interactions and dialogue are so realistic, so normal and everyday, that it makes your characters a joy to read b/c the reader can relate to them.
Nice job :) Thanks for taking on a challenge this month and it's good to have you back writing on RH again in general! *hugs*