Date: 28 Mar 2010 03:50 PM Title: Gunpowder and Lead
This was an interesting story. I like how the style of the writting fits the mood of what's written. And Asha.
I don't know exactly how to explain it, but it feels like her.
Well done, thanks for sharing.
Date: 04 Nov 2009 07:45 PM Title: Gunpowder and Lead
This is one of the few stories that does justice to Asha. I think she should have been an edgier character than what the writers did to her (but she got off considering the mess that was Season 2). Good work.
Date: 03 Nov 2009 02:09 PM Title: Gunpowder and Lead
What a sad portrayal of life before the show. Your asha is a strong woman and I like that. She has a lot of great qualities. I just wish that her character on the show had been more like this.
Nice work.
Date: 02 Nov 2009 04:09 PM Title: Gunpowder and Lead
Whoa, this was a really, really good short story! I felt like I got to know a side of Asha that I've never seen before. I also like how her need to get into the S1W was a major part of her reason for dating Darrell in the first place. I thought you did a great job with making well-rounded characters.
Totally my favorite line: "She was going to show him what little girls were made of. And it wasn't sugar and spice."
Awesome fic! Great job!!
Date: 01 Nov 2009 11:33 PM Title: Gunpowder and Lead
very nice! I enjoyed this a lot! You wrote Asha fantasticly! Loved every second, keep up the great work!
Date: 24 Oct 2009 12:45 AM Title: Gunpowder and Lead
Interesting spin on her life before Seattle. While Asha seemed like a 'take it as it comes' kind of girl on the show, I also got a sense of quiet strength from her. She also cared about doing the right thing, making things better, so I found this piece rather fitting to her character. It's a sad history, a rotten home life and a bum deal those girls were dealt, but score one for Asha in taking the steps necessary to remove herself and her sister from a bad situation.
Well done, hon. I adore you for doing the Country music challenge. And I really like your song choice - I can see why it works. Thanks for taking part in the challenges this month!
Date: 23 Oct 2009 02:27 PM Title: Gunpowder and Lead
Wow... The last time I read a Asha-story was well... Never so this was a very cool potrayal of her and the telling of her past.