[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2009 01:21 AM Title: Grief By Proxy
Oh yes, my heart still bleeds for their forefeit love.
You captured his emotions which he daren't show his superiors beautifully here.
Lovely image of the use of the prompt "rain" as a substitute for Alec's own tears.
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie! Validation is always wonderful and your comments really hit the spot. And it's always a challenge to fit everything into 100 words, but that's one of the reasons I love writing drabbles. I'm glad you liked the transference in the rain/tears. It's what inspired the piece to begin with. :) Thank you for reading and commenting!
Date: 19 Sep 2009 07:27 PM Title: Grief By Proxy
Oh, poor Alec, my heart really goes to him here! But he had no other choice but to go on... So Sad.
Author's Response:
Right? I have been going back and rewatching some of the DA episodes and it occurred to me that I hadn't really considered what it might be like for Alec in an intimate situation with another female after the Berrisord operation. Given what we know (and what my brain imagined) Manticore to be like, I would think he would soldier on and bury his feelings.
Thanks for reading and commenting, hon! I'm please to hear that this piece touched you in some way :)