love it looking forward to more

Its been a long time since you've updated. So im worried this might be never completed. Please Update soon. This is absolutely fantastic. Its angsty, Humorous and still romantic that you just cant wait for the next chapter. 

More please! Im addicted, one-hundred percent. Please update soon!

It's not over yet is it? Hope you feel better soon so you can write more!

*DANCES*

Very much worth the caps!!!! I loved this so much!!! And am anxiously awaiting the next - GO PAINKILLERS!!! :P Hope you get better soon mate :D

Oooh, nice! Things are heating up. I like that nothing too explicit happens (in all the chapters, I mean), and yet it's very sensual.

I like the way you're progressing things. I like how they slowly grow closer, how they slowly start to really *see* each other. 

Hope you'll update soon.

Maia.

Awww. You do know how to twist the knife. *hugs them both*

Well done again.

Yay, as promised!!
“Max, what do you think of that?” Max merely glared at the woman, who nodded in response. “Alec, would you be comfortable talking dirty, during foreplay and/or intercourse?”
Alec’s grin couldn’t possibly get any wider. “Absolutely.”

I totally laughed. And, also, I’m so jealous of her.

“She nodded, and gulped a little, feeling his chest pressed up against her, rising and falling as he moved his head down her neck, making it look like he was paying attention to her erogenous zones but really just breathing on her.
Which really, really, shouldn’t have affected her as much as it did.”

Yes, it should, Max. Don’t be an idiot.

““Well you weren’t in your right mind, you were in Logan’s right mind. And now you’ve learned how scary a place that is,” he retorted sharply.”

Haha! Nice. Love it.

I am so jealous she got a massage from him, I can’t even tell you. My back feels like shit. K, not really the point, I realize. But still.

“Fine. He wants a wife, he’ll get a wife.”

I can’t even express how excited this makes me.

I love it! More, more more! Great situation, great lines, all it needs is more a86;

Great Great Gre at !!!!!!

Keep going I can't wait to know what you've got up your sleeve ;)

Hope to read from you soon!!!!! 

I love them having to deal with Jackie because I am not the only one who should have to suffer perky people.

“Joyous, Alec thought. I’m tied to Max – and she’s feeling homicidal.”

It’s joyous for me, is what matters.

“Jackie, oblivious as always, didn’t notice a thing. She giggled, waved and flounced off. No, really – there was flouncing.”

I love the ‘no really’ add on. You should see my smile. It’s toothy.

“Max gulped as his skin was exposed, she could see the light over his hip bone and there was a small freckle just past his hip. And there, where he was pointing, a small white scar that was a little crooked half moon shape.”

Twas sad when he stopped there, but I enjoyed it anyway.

“He ignored the water in her eyes and she ignored the pride and strength he beamed at her when she squeezed his hand back. And in that instant, she realized that she might not be the only one who wanted to dream.”

Awwwwwwwww

“Of course, they’d been tired, so they continued holding hands until they reached their cottage.
Neither of them was willing to think about what that might mean.”

Stubborn asses.

““That all of your problems with each other come from talking,” he said. Both transgenics’ eyes shot up at the statement.”

So true! But also, that’s where like 95% of the entertainment is, so you really can’t win.

““Oh, and don’t forget to keep touching each other. You have a session with my wife in the morning on practices for re-stimulating your sex life.””

Exciting!

If you ever wanted to continue this story, I would be so happy to read more. Even if you don’t, it’s super entertaining as it is, totally worth reading.

Author's Response: So yes, this will be continued. Work takes up an extremely large portion of my life during the summers, as classes do during the year. But chapter four is 2/3 done, full of banter and more fun like so. And thank you so much for your review! Please keep quoting me. It's the highest honor to me when someone quotes my work to me. ^^ Thanks!

“Alec was still bouncing up and down – he didn’t have to play the part of nervous husband, he was nervous as hell being anywhere near a psychiatrist.”

I love this deliciously uncomfortable situation!

God, there is almost too much to quote, it is all so awesome. The premise just lends itself so beautifully to awesomeness. I said almost, though. Quoting is my favored method of review and I will not be thwarted, dammit.

“ So Max just said the first thing the came to her head. “Alec slept with another woman,” she answered, trying to sound calm, but her voice wavered a little.
Alec groaned silently. Of course, he had to be the bad guy – Max couldn’t have it any other way. Instead of saying anything and blowing their cover he just grit his teeth as the shrink scribbled down notes on her bright yellow legal pad.”

I like how you throw in little details that we take in, but don’t really get bogged down in because of the vastly entertaining situation. Also, oh MAX! I love how typical it is and how they have to deal with those feelings that she really has about it even though obviously in this context his being with other women shouldn’t be a problem, but you can see how it KINDA IS. Love! And he hates that she thinks that. Double love!

“I’d like Alec to answer please, Max.” Max crossed her arms and leaned back into the couch with a ‘hmph’. Alec shot a cheeky smile at her and she could just hear the ‘so there!’ in his head.
“Logan’s her ex-boyfriend. They talk every day and he’s always asking her to help with his work and she runs off at the drop of a hat.” Alec answered, smirking on the inside. Payback? Why yes, you are a bitch.

!! I love her making Max shut up and then Alec hitting her right back, it’s excellent and I love how they are dragging their real lives into it.

““He won’t touch Max because-” of a military engineered bio-warfare virus that will kill him if they touch- “because he’s a germaphobe, so he won’t touch her without latex gloves on.” “

I wouldn’t even be surprised if that were true…

““Maybe I just think you’re cute,” he answered, winking at her. She smiled and waited patiently for a real response, until he gave in. “Look, I said I’d do it. I don’t half-ass anything and I’m not starting with my marriage,” he grumbled, crossing his arms over his chest.”

I love this comment on his character. I also love his character.

I love the whole back and forth about their relationship from their perspectives, great juxtaposition. God, I swore I’d never use that word after art school. Oh well.

““Logan doesn’t understand Max. He keeps thinking she’ll change and he constantly uses her as a means to achieve ends in his work and without his work, there’s nothing between them. He’s from a completely different background – she’s from the streets and he’s from penthouses. They never seemed to have fun together – it was just a long cycle of “it’s over” and “we’re not like that.” They weren’t going anywhere.””

I can never read enough about why Max and Logan suck as a couple. It just makes me happy.

“Max shuffled, uncomfortable and Alec choked a little bit. Clearly he needed to reassess how devious Dr. Gibbons was.”

HAH!!

““Does Alec want to have sex with you?”
Finally, an easy question. Max should her head. “No.””

Is she high?!?

“Alright. In my professional opinion, your marriage is salvable.”
Max blinked slowly then turned to look at Alec who had a similar shocked look on his face. After what she had asked the two of them to admit that day, they had both believed the doctor would declare them hopeless.

I totally cracked up when after all their No, No No bullshit that she said that. Awesome.

This is great!! Please write more I wanna know what happens...

Good chapter, keep it up.  I liked how you show their relationship building, geting ready for the hot loving.