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Reviewer: Twinchy Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2009 12:48 AM Title: Ten Things I Hate About You

What a powerful start with Ames resenting Max for kidnapping his son. *nods apprecitively* And it goes on strong from there. You make White have a point in some respects but not in others - which makes me smile and feel sorry for him - right before you beat him down for good by having him realize (bit by painful bit) his feelings for Max.

P.S.: LOL at your comment about Ames doing the golf swing without a shirt if it were your call. :-D

Reviewer: Gemini Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2009 09:45 PM Title: Ten Things I Hate About You

This was funny=)  Any chance of one from Max's point of view?



Author's Response: Really? (blushes) Erm... I'll think about it! Thanks for reading, makes an author's heart warm... :D

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