It's wonderful when clarity comes to a person. Though it would be infinitely better if it came all at once instead of in flashes over an extended period of time. Would save some people a lot of heartache.

End of the story had me all smiles. Fluff and sweetness and a super awwwwww moment.

Awesome last line. *grins*

This was such a wonderful story, hon! I wasn't sure what to expect when you first mentioned the idea. Hollywood? Movies in post-Pulse America? Well, I'm pleased to say that it was a funtastic experience. I laughed a lot reading it and it was such a feel-good story! It is such a wonderful talent to have - the ability to make others laugh. Kudos on a job well done.

Thanks so much for sharing and for posting this here on RH. I hope we'll see more of your work soon - and you in general :) Love ya, hon! Talk soon? MWAH.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much!!! *hugs*

I'm so happy that you liked that last line, lol! It was just too good to pass up, lol.

I really can't tell you how much your comments mean! *hugs you again* I had a wonderful time writing it. I wound up writing most of it when I was sick. I had a very nasty cold, and felt miserable, and needed something to distract me. I started writing, and didn't stop, lol. :) Praise the Lord, I finished it just a couple weeks after that. I so happy that you enjoyed it, and that it made you laugh!

Thank you so much for helping to inspire the fic with the great prompts here! I'd had the idea for the story a while ago, but I had no place to start from, and I thought it was just going to be one of those ideas that would just float around my mind unwritten.

Once again, thank you so much for commenting on each chapter! It's been so much fun reading your reactions! Talk to you soon! *hugs*

Very good action sequence.

Poor Mole - what happened tohim?? *wants to know*
Oh, noze! Leave Tiger-Lady ALONE, you meanies! She's had enough!

OHHHHH boy. Maxie's in trouble - is Alec going to be in time? Is he going to be foolish? Do I need to break out the tissue box?

*bites fingernails*

Why must she always make things difficult?!

Oh, oh, oh. Sad, now.

Gee, such opposition to a little smooching. What red-blooded woman in her right mind would say no to that opportunity?! Is the girl blind? *sigh*

Oh goodness! I can't believe Max actually went to Logan about it. *laughing myself to tears*

Anyway, loving the tension!

Author's Response: LOL. Max rarely seems to be in her right mind when it comes to Alec... ;)

*grins* I couldn't resist having Max go to Logan about that scene. She was so upset, she just didn't think about how strange it would seem for her to object to kissing her "boyfriend." :D

Well done, Logan! I'm really liking the way he works :) If cyberjournalism ever fails... :P

Very interesting new info. Shot my curiosity up a notch or two!

Enjoying the little hints of burgeoning feeling, even if I'm still a little sad for the Logie-bear.

Hey, do they get to keep the clothes from the film? Just wonderin'... :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed Logan's detective/undercover work! This is the most I've ever written Logan, and the first EO mission fic I've done. It was a really interesting challenge. :)

I hadn't really thought much about the clothes to be honest -- beyond making Max suffer in those terrible outfits, lol -- but I imagine they probably wouldn't be able to keep them. The film company has so little money, they probably keep all the costumes so they can reuse them later. (But Max's pink waitress outfit is brought up again in the one-shot sequel, which will, Lord willing, be finished soon, lol. :) )

*pets Alec* Poor boy is suffering, Logan's upset and projecting it... it's not pretty boy's fault (well, it is, but you know!)

Ah. I don't blame Alec for wanting to get out of that trailer. Scenic walks are always nice. *inhales fresh mountain air* but, uh oh! Guards? And more guards! And omigosh - MORE GUARDS! There's something really fishy going on here...

Close call, Alec! Smart, quick thinking (and wow, did you look GOOD flexing... *cough*)

Loved the first scene in the diner :) Made me giggle.

And ooh, Logan's being all sleuthy! Go, Logie, go!


Author's Response: Logan really was being snippy...I have to admit, that scene was fun to write, lol. :)

I'm glad you liked the scene with Alec jumping into the tree! I would have loved to see something like that on the show. We seemed to get kind of cheated in the Alec transgenic-ability department. And he does look very good when he's using those enhanced reflexes, lol... ;)

I'm also very happy you enjoyed the scene in the diner. Max really enjoyed throwing that glass of water on poor Alec, lol.

Hmm, what can I say... I'm sad to see this go, I've enjoyed reading it immensly and now it's no more *tears*. Yeah, there's a sequel but still it'll be that, the end.. Oh well. 

Alright, starting on Logan, seeing him moving on is always a plus, but why does it always have to be with Asha, if with a woman? Don't get me wrong, I like Asha (unlike many other MAx-fans, I've noticed) but eh, why not like reunite him with his ex wife or someone else, cus that would be a big shocker. But then, it works with Asha so why ruin it and listen to me.. So Ignore what I just said, yeah.. =P

And hey, Tiger knows Joshua from before, that's good to know, and oh, yeah she doesn't talk... Or she just prefers not to? TeHehe.

And Max and Alec... Alec and Max. I loved how you wrote them, they were very much in character throughout the story. And obviously, the guy got the girl (or viceversa)!

And this?..: Alec grinned.

“How ‘bout a movie?” -So chessy =P. I don't really know what to say. Just Fabulous story, I'll be shure to read it again. Hope you do more M/A work. First do sequel.

Only one chapter left?! Nooh, say it ain't so.. Fine. With a sequel the movie (yay) will come up. The sequel better be looong then, *hmmph* that's all I'm saying...

It seems like Tiger (gee, wonder where you got that name from lol) and Alec are getting closer, huh? Kinda like Joshua and Max. Speaking of Josh, I'd love for him to meet Tiger. Wonder what would happen there y'know.

And finally yes... Alec was hit again.. Make sure Max gives him a lot more attention then what she gave him during the show but then you're a lot better writer than the writers of the show ever were. See ya!

Hey, this was way awesome. You really delivered with the action scenes, but then there's even more? Very impressice, it was very easy to visualize it happening. And I must say I quite like the tiger-lady, what will be her name?

He felt like one of those American tourists people complained about, the ones who thought that if they spoke English loud enough and slow enough, everybody would understand them.- And this had me laughing out loud cus I just watched it earlier today on a TV-show.

Sighs... Sometimes you just wanna *strangle* Max because that girl is so... ARRGH! But eh, i should have known it wouldn't have been that easy, like here Max let her fears get the better of her. She (as usual) lashed out out him and poor Alec got his hopes up..

Teresa was cool, you made me like her in the ending, I didn't at the start (but that's common for me).

And as for Logan... Just leave him to his EO stuff and everything will be fine, just as long as Max and Alec can get their stuff together!

GREAT CHAP!!

You, you... Arrgh! Aww, man that's just.. cold, leaving it there. And poor Logan, he's still hung up on our Maxie, I would have that thought he would have jumped at the idea of not having to see her kissing Alec but instead he was mature enough to put his feelings aside and think of the bigger picture.. And I thank him humbly for that, hah.

I love this fic, it's so different and new but seriously, I'm begging you: Put. The. Next. Part. UP!

I LIKE YOUR STORY SO FAR. IT'S VERY INTERESTING. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE. I HOPE YOUR GOING TO MAKE IT INTO NC 17. IT SEEMS LIKE IT COULD GET THAT WAY. LOVE THE PREMISE SO FAR.