Date: 24 Jul 2010 02:56 AM Title: As One Would Have It
It's always awful when they think that the other is dead, but it is always intense when they find out they really aren't. I love them, I'm glad they aren't dead.
Author's Response: Me too :P
Date: 10 Mar 2010 10:58 AM Title: As One Would Have It
Nice use of the prompts.
Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading :D
Date: 05 Jun 2009 11:24 AM Title: As One Would Have It
Whoow.. This was brilliantly played and oh yeah was I very pleased about the ending, with getting a teensy bit insecure there... Yup, this definitely left me stumped.
Author's Response: I'm glad it kept you entertained. I'm easily entertained so I often find it hard to compensate for those that aren't :D
Date: 25 May 2009 10:19 PM Title: As One Would Have It
Interesting turn of events, well told and nicely inserted prompts.
You're right, White probably should have known better than to play with fire like that. Maybe he should only have tried to fool either Max or Alec with news about their respective deaths, not both at the same time - might have made for a better result for him too.
Author's Response: Yeah, every character is fallible - something I hope I showed here :D
Date: 25 May 2009 04:04 PM Title: As One Would Have It
I liked it, Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2009 10:49 AM Title: As One Would Have It
That was spectacular. You worked in all the prompts so well and the end result was...! Awesome stuff.
I didn't know your OMC, Camo, but I liked him immediately. Quick on the uptake, smart, determined, loyal (or so it seemed :)) It's always nice to feel some affinity to an original character in a piece. I hate when they feel superfluous.
Sad how sometimes it takes nearly dying/losing someone to realize just how much you care, huh?
Sorry I'm drifting (*yawns*) and it's not your story that put me to sleep *laughs* I'm just exhausted. Didn't get enough sleep.
Nicely done! Hope to see more of your work soon! :) Feel free to write more - we never turn down good fanfic submissions! :D
Author's Response: Thanks, I loved writing this and I'm glad you liked it :D