[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2013 10:01 AM Title: What It Takes
Not bad. I must admit wanted to read the scene where they FINALLY profest their love for each other. You did great with the dance scene b/c I could picture it vividly in my mind. Keep up the awesome work.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 02:40 PM Title: What It Takes
Hey, it's a fun fic. I actually like that they did not say anything about their feelings. Also like all the things left unsaid. I always like having things left to my imagination :).
The dance and the tree were fun. I recently saw Honey and while not the greatest movie of all times, I could picture Max dancing perfectly.
My only little nitpick was the taser. Max being on top of the guard, wouldn't she have tasered herself? How would the electricity not pass on to her? Perhaps if she fired it and immediately jumped back it would be solved? If so, maybe it was not entirely clear, seemed to me she was trapped between the wall and the guy.
Anyway, just a detail, I liked the story a lot. Thanks for sharing!