Date: 17 Jul 2012 06:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
I must admit the Logan/Alec slash ship is starting to grow on me. I was a bit weirded out at first, not by the guy-on-guy thing, but a genuine dislike for the almost creepy stalker vibe Logan had going on during the second season when he wouldn't just back off and give Max some peace.
But I did particularly enjoy this. Very nice build up and descriptions.
Date: 11 Mar 2009 06:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
*lol* nice! half-naked Alec is always good ;) Especially like the last few paragraphs...
“I hope you appreciate the amount of flirting I had to do to get into that hotel,” - “Not to mention the fact that I stood soaking wet in my cold apartment just to let you ogle me.”
*roflmao*
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2009 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Aw, that was really a sweet and well-written beginning of a promising romance. You sold their endless and insecure beating about the bush concerning their obviously mutual feelings hands down, sprite.
I laughed so hard at Logan's noticing the new whereabouts of his towel... what a way to weave the prompt word into the fic!
Gorgeous job, especially for a premiere-author. *applauds in awe*
Date: 27 Feb 2009 09:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Nice! I wouldn't normally say this - slash in general isn't my thing and in DA it's even rarer (though I did recently take a stab at some Alec/Zack at another's request) but you actually piqued my interest in reading more of this pairing - in this setting. Meaning, I'd love to see you explore what you've started and see if you can't develop it into something explosive. I'd read it, and that's saying something!
I liked Logan's wavering. Denial can be a sneaky thing, lust can be complicated and then, being uncertain of another's feelings in the mix can make for a complicated situation. I almost feld bad for him :) But not quite. Cuz Alec did what I would have thought he would do; he made a move and didn't beat around the bush. That's hot :)
You made two characters that I normally wouldn't see together in any way play so nicely. I hope you'll try it again some time!
Nice use of the prompt *grins* and thank you for sharing!
Date: 27 Feb 2009 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Aww... so cute!! Love it, love it!!
Unusual direction with the prompt - nice and original. Well done!