[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2009 09:00 PM Title: Cor Cordis
Awwwww...that was too adorably sweet! Just how I like it. Admittedly, a little out there, but I've become very good at suspending reality for a few minutes for a good story, lol. I didn't really understand the towel line though. What did that have to do with his leaving? And I think that choked is spelled like this (I know, it doesn't look right to me either). Other than that, I loved it. Good job!
Date: 11 Mar 2009 05:56 PM Title: Cor Cordis
*sigh* so cute! and heart-breaking and heart-warming and just... thanks for this :)
Author's Response: You're welcome :) And thank you for reading and reviewing! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2009 09:06 PM Title: Cor Cordis
Wonderful and heart-warming story in response to the February Challenge, Sue.
Your writing style of giving various situations - humorous and serious both - throughout the years with introductory lines, fit very well with the content and made for a smooth reading experience.
The idea of integrating the prompt phrase in particular was refreshing and unexpected. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you Twinchy :) Wow, I didn't know what else to say except, thank you! haha I rarely get reviews that is this detail (except from my beta) and I really appreaciate the time you took in sharing with me your thoughts on this story. *hugs* You made my day, you really have.
Date: 03 Mar 2009 11:23 AM Title: Cor Cordis
Loved this :)
Author's Response: Thank you Karen :) And also, thanks for the review!
Date: 02 Mar 2009 01:19 AM Title: Cor Cordis
Awww, that was beautiful *claps loudly* Yayayayayayay!!!!!
Author's Response: Hee! Thanks for the review SkylarGrace! :D
Date: 18 Feb 2009 11:36 AM Title: Cor Cordis
Aww, I loved every bit of this. Fantastic job!!
Author's Response: Thanks Insomnia :) I'm glad you like this. Thank you for the review!
Date: 17 Feb 2009 07:16 AM Title: Cor Cordis
Such a sweet fic. Well, bittersweet most of the way through but we get our happy ending so I guess it takes a turn for the better :)
I was mulling it over after you first showed it to me and I was thinking how it might be interesting for their to be a companion piece to it. I just think it might be interesting to show Max 'seeing' these things, noticing them, through someone elses eyes. I'm sure that might seem a little 'okaaay, whatever' to you b/c I know I'm not explaining :P but it's in my head.
Writers shouldn't be allowed to make me think. Even if it is a sign of a good fic...
Author's Response:
Awwww thank you, Shay!
The companion idea sounds super cool, hon. You know what, why don't you take a stab at it? coughhintcoughpleasecough