Date: 30 Jul 2012 07:32 PM Title: 1
I liked this one. Nicely balanced for drama/suspense and emotions.
Date: 14 Feb 2009 05:37 PM Title: 1
Wow. You really conveyed the fear and uncertainty, in Alec and in Max. I like how she seemed to be aware even as she was unconscious and just unable to communicate. The tone of the story was frantic and on edge and I kept expecting something horrible to happen. (I'm glad it didn't!)
Above all, I think I liked Logan best. He did his best to help, made sure she was safe and backed away from the scene when all was over and done with a quiet dignity. Respect to you for allowing him to bow out gracefully.
Nicely written. Thanks ever so for sharing.