Date: 10 Feb 2009 07:04 PM Title: Arguments in Parking Lots
Well written short story in answer to the prompt.
I especially liked your not revealing right from the beginning who the speakers in the lot were (even though I had a hunch) and the conversation as such, because it portrayed closeness between the characters without getting cheesy.
Author's Response: *Grins* Thank you. I like playing around with expectations a little, regarding who is talking to who for instance. Glad you liked it.
Date: 07 Feb 2009 09:15 AM Title: Arguments in Parking Lots
*lol* you had me guessing until the end whether it was Logan or Alec :D
I like the thought very much that Logan cares about Max enough to get her to confess her feelings to his former rival.
You've written a really nice 'nice Logan' XD
Thanks for sharing!
Date: 02 Feb 2009 03:40 PM Title: Arguments in Parking Lots
Oh, yeah you really had me fooled there. I totally thought the guy talking to Max was Alec and being the one all heartbroken as usual.. But hey, such a cool twist!
Date: 02 Feb 2009 02:53 PM Title: Arguments in Parking Lots
An adult Max? All I saw in my mental picture was Max stomping her feet like a little girl throwing a temper tantrum.
Which was completely hilarious btw since I wasn't expecting the adult Logan version. I like this version better than what the 'official' writers gave us.
Kudos to you !
Date: 13 Dec 2008 10:31 PM Title: Arguments in Parking Lots
aw! definitely enjoyed the twist!