[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2008 11:48 PM Title: The Story
i really liked the story keep up the good work
Date: 02 Dec 2008 04:32 PM Title: The Story
Hah, this was hellah funny.. Serves Logan right, trying to *offer* help on an defensless old woman.. *snort*
But damn, I really could believe that Granny could kick his ass *and* his, precious Bessie (Bang!) and I don't know if I want Max or Alec to be the one to have seen it all at the end.. Maybe both, yeah (LoL!).
Hilarious!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the story :) though it wasn't meant to serve Logan right :P
I got the idea for the story from my cousin who's this sweet guy and he tried to help an older lady at the supermarket and she hit him in the stomach with an umbrella! When he told me the story I just saw Logan being that nice guy, more so than anyone else (even Alec) Anyway, in the end it was more that he hoped no one saw a woman whoop his ass :D but someone might have :) I let the readers' imaginations decide who that might have been :D
Thank you for reading and commenting, hon! You made me smile :D
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2008 12:47 AM Title: The Story
OMGOSH! Poor Logan! He just wanted to help and an old lady ends up kicking his butt! ~ Shakes head with a chuckle ~ It was a good laugh, but also brought a tear to my eye. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I felt bad for him here, too! Can you believe that I've gotten reviews (elsewhere) that keep putting him down? Saying how glad they are that he got his butt kicked and that someone witnessed it? Anyway, I the story was inspired by my cousin who was wacked in the tummy by an old woman with an umbrella for even suggesting he should open a door for her - she told him that she wasn't a useless old lady and could do it herself :P So, yeah, it brought to mind the idea of someone good doing somthing nice and getting hell for it! :)
I'm glad that you enjoyed this. Thank you for reading and commenting, sweetie! *hugs*