Date: 26 Oct 2009 10:04 PM Title: KIA
I feel terrible for them! :( Great ficlet. I thought you showed what Max was feeling in a sharp, pointed way that went straight to the bottom of her emotions. Very nice!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! :)
Max always seems to blame herself when things go wrong, and I couldn't help thinking that, in a situation like that, she'd see their deaths as her fault too.
I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!
Date: 17 Nov 2008 12:48 AM Title: KIA
Great story! I love how tender it is.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! :)
I'm sorry it took me so long to answer. My regular email argues with Raising, and I just now got the alert.
Take care and God bless! :)
-Laughter
Date: 05 Nov 2008 11:58 PM Title: KIA
awww! i want alec safe and sound too.
Author's Response:
So do I. :)
Thank you so much!
Take care and God bless!
-Laughter
Date: 03 Nov 2008 03:00 PM Title: KIA
Oh,to have all of that feeling of failure.. I was just happy that Alec at least was there by her side.
Short but different.. Great work!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
I couldn't help thinking that Max would blame herself, and Alec would realize that. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!
Take care and God bless! :)
-Laughter
Date: 29 Oct 2008 06:09 PM Title: KIA
Wow... that is kinda powerful.
Interesting interpretation of the prompt - you totally went somewhere else! Nicely done though. Hope to see more of your work here...
Author's Response:
Date: 29 Oct 2008 08:57 AM Title: KIA
Aw, bittersweet little piece. The story screams sadness and loss but there's that little bit of comfort there that makes me wanna cry...
Thanks for sharing, hon!
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