Date: 21 Apr 2009 01:25 PM Title: After Work
Haa, loved the update =D, more Alec and Max interaction, just waiting for the "talk" for them to go forwards. Speaking of talks, next up will hopefully be the "breakup-talk" between Logan and Max. But something is telling me not to hope for it just yet... Sigh. We'll see..
Update ASAP!
Date: 20 Apr 2009 08:58 AM Title: Breakfast
Hey, hon!
Just got around to reading this. I didn't read the original so I'm not sure how it differed from this rewrite, but I do have quite a few suggestions for you if you want to discuss it some time.
Mostly, though, I suggest a beta-reader to help smooth some of the uneven bits and possibly help you out a bit with characterization/dialogue according to character.
Don't get me wrong; it wasn't bad! And I am not out to pick away at the story. I just thought that with a few minor changes it could go from good to better.
Anyway, if I haven't insulted you into the next millenium, feel free to drop me a line and maybe we can sit down and figure this out :)
Have a great day, hon! And thanks for this.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading it. ^^ I would love to make this a better story since this was my first fanfic. I wrote it so long ago and thought it was time for a rewrite to happen.
A beta-reader is a good idea and it would be a quite helpful since I usually don't look it over when I'm done... which is a probably bad idea to do...
Thanks for the advice and I'd love to find out a better way to fix it up. ^^
Date: 18 Feb 2009 12:03 PM Title: Just Great
Interesting... I'm glad that Alec finally told her and now I wanna know more about how Max feels. And yeah, what's up with Loggie boy? He's just gonna ruin everything, isn't he.. Loving Biggs and OC perceptions of M/A! Good so far!