Date: 02 Jul 2010 03:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG. That. Was. So. Fucking. Hot!
The scene practically jumped off the page. Awesome work!
Date: 24 Feb 2009 02:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
I HAVE TO SAY THIS IS NOT USUALLY MY TASTE BUT YOUR WRITING MADE IT VERY HONEST AND COMPELLING AND VERY EROTIC. GOOD FOR YOU KEEP UP YOUR WRITING.
Date: 27 Jul 2008 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ok, truthfully, it's excruciatingly painful for me to read anything besides M/A (I'm such an obsessive compulsive OTPer it's not even funny) but WOW! Very hot!! Five stars for you!
Author's Response: Obsessive compulsive OTPer with severe adversion to alternate pairings and yet you still read this? And enjoyed it? Wow, that means a lot! Thanks!