Date: 21 Oct 2008 05:57 PM Title: Last Straw
Yeah! It's refreshing to see a fic where Alec finally has enough of Max's repressed elementary school crap and just snaps forcing her to admit her feelings for him. I like how you kept him in control of himself even in snapping, though, because being in control of himself is definitely very important to 494.
Thanks for writing.
Date: 06 Aug 2008 03:46 AM Title: Last Straw
good story sweet ending and well written
Date: 17 Jul 2008 08:06 PM Title: Last Straw
Good story! I love a happy ending thought I'm not sure their argument would have gotten resolved that quickly or easily on the show but what do they know eh? Thanks for the read.
Date: 17 Jul 2008 01:24 PM Title: Last Straw
Nice work, hon! It's nice to see them 'talking' their issues out and seeing the light :) Sweet little piece. Thank you for sharing with us!
Date: 16 Jul 2008 08:46 PM Title: Last Straw
Aaawwww! very nicely done!
“Since when, Max?” Alec said softly, stepping slowly towards her. And she didn’t move back. “Max, I’m gonna tell you this one last time. I’m here, ready to listen, just like I always have been. Talk to me.”
Really liked how you did that part especially!