Date: 05 Sep 2010 04:46 PM Title: Last-PG
I love these! I'm too lazy to review every chapter seperately, so I'll do a brief one here. Hope you don't mind.
A: Squee! I love that Alec does so much for Max. I love that she chose him even though Logan was cured, so there wasn't that hanging over them for all time. :)
B: I love jealous!Alec. I don't know why. I just do. And you write him very well, a slow building jealousy 'til he just has to punch poor Brick in the face.
C: Smut! Teasing! Pool cue! And can I just say that I would love to see Logan's reaction to walking in on Max and Alec?
D: :) I love Manticore fics. I especially like this one. Fatherly Deck! Brotherly Zack & Zane! Jace and Tinga still get families! If you ever happen to be sitting around wanting to write an epic, I would totally vote for more in this 'verse. Just a thought. :)
E: Aww. Family life and acceptance in a small town. I heart. And for some reason I have this image of Alex calling Mole "Uncle Mole" and hanging on to his neck as Mole walks around without even really noticing. Weird.
F: Woo, paint bombs! And yay cake! Serves Logan right. I'm not really a Logan fan, so I heartily approve.
G: Mourning for Biggs! I loved Biggs. There aren't nearly enough fics involving Biggs. This one makes me sniffle.
H: Yay Biggs again! And Biggs/Alec BFF heroes! And Logan being shot down for being a jerk! And Biggs and the nurse! And Max and Alec in bed together! Can you tell I really like this one? I think it's my favorite.
I: Sam+Max=sisters! I heart. And Logan bashing yay! Present but not over the top. And everyone else can tell them apart! :) This one's my second favorite, I think.
J: Very unique. Not at all what I was expecting from the prompt. Damn straight he should be jealous! They're so awesome together, even when they're prisoners.
K: I love how we get little glimpses of them being cute together. So sweet. And a bonus yay for inclusion of Dalton!
L: Okay, I love the image of all of TC lined up to get a kiss from the leaders. Awesomeness. Yay for Alec's casual proposal versus Logan's dramatic and fairly insincere sounding proposal. Also, I love how the others were peripherally involved in them getting together.
In conclusion, I sort of love you. And more than sort of love your work. I definitely will keep an eye on your page in hopes of updates. :) Sorry this got so long!
Author's Response: Thank you for that wonderful review, and I promise I haven't given up on this series. You can most definitely expect more from the 'daughter' verse, after all, they still have to take down the evil 'eyes only';P
Date: 09 Mar 2009 01:57 PM Title: Last-PG
That was so sweet :) loved it.
Date: 13 Dec 2008 11:06 PM Title: Daughter-PG
yeah, alec could convert a nun. :)
Date: 13 Dec 2008 10:56 PM Title: Cold-NC17
hee! love oc and sketch's 'spectator sport' approach to the hormonal shenanigans.
Date: 13 Dec 2008 10:50 PM Title: Brick-PG
it may not be nice to watch alec's chain being yanked, but it sure is fun. :)
Date: 13 Dec 2008 10:46 PM Title: Anything-PG13
great storytelling through the snapshots. and so sweet!
Date: 07 Nov 2008 11:03 PM Title: Frosting-PG
hee! i'm really enjoying these. Nice blend of angst and silliness.
Date: 07 Nov 2008 09:48 PM Title: Anything-PG13
this is so sweet. nice story-telling too, brief but very vivid.
Date: 03 Oct 2008 09:56 PM Title: Frosting-PG
Very cute! You "cooked up" a good little story here! (HA)
Date: 03 Oct 2008 09:53 PM Title: Enough-PG to PG13
Good job! Would have like it if you had explored the whole how Max and Alec reconnected romantically though. I'm a sucker for the romance.
Date: 21 Sep 2008 08:21 AM Title: Frosting-PG
Sketchy would look good in pink lol, loved it.
Date: 11 Sep 2008 03:01 AM Title: Enough-PG to PG13
A litter sad but a happy ending :)
Date: 04 Sep 2008 08:50 PM Title: Daughter-PG
i love 'Daughter'! Great job!
Date: 26 Aug 2008 02:41 AM Title: Daughter-PG
Love it - a daughter doesn't have to be blood related. Your characterisations were perfect; the plot, the dialogue, the few liberties (Liz!! ha hah!!) all worked so well.
Really enjoying your series. Between you and Nickledime, I've been inspired to write my own alpha-set. If I get a few more ready, I'll be posting soon... Love and hugs, BadCat
Date: 10 Aug 2008 10:13 PM Title: Cold-NC17
that wasn't really an nc17 chapter but it was cute none the less...you should uh add to this particuler chapter
Author's Response:
Oh, I intent to;D I just need to decide if I want to do it as another letter or an actual one shot. In the mean time, just picture Logan's reaction...an laugh.
Luvs and Hugs
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2008 09:10 PM Title: Cold-NC17
Haha!!! I love pretty much everything you write and this particular chapter had me laughing! Can't wait for the next installment.
Date: 30 Jul 2008 11:09 PM Title: Anything-PG13
Loved this one...very touching. I also liked B and C stories but this was my favorite so far. Can't wait for you to finish more letters to see if I like another even more. Great job!
Date: 29 Jul 2008 01:20 AM Title: Cold-NC17
Loved it, Grat job :)
Date: 07 Jul 2008 08:21 AM Title: Brick-PG
Great. And jelous Alec must be a sight... :))
Date: 07 Jul 2008 08:06 AM Title: Anything-PG13
Brilliant. and that part with crazy Chihuahua?? hilarious!!
Date: 24 Jun 2008 03:39 PM Title: Brick-PG
Ver-rry nice...
Too wiped to say anymore than I like this. I like the contained oneShots you're posting but they seem to have a plot arc too so I'm happily waiting for more.
Please have more!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying them, but not all of them will have a plot arc, but you can expect to see Brick in other fics. I abolutely fell in love with that character while I was writing him:) However, there are a few that are continuations and some that I want to extend to full stories. If you see one you particularly like let me know;P
Luvs and Hugs
Date: 24 Jun 2008 07:14 AM Title: Anything-PG13
He would do anything for her, because Anything meant Everything.
Great Line and Great Story... Keep Up the Good Work