Reviews For Lost Blue Skies
Reviewer: Kat Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 09:27 AM Title: Kindly Unspoken
Date: 17 Aug 2012 09:27 AM Title: Kindly Unspoken
This is a good story and I'd like to see more of it. The only con, is that I would get someone to beta your work. There are a lot of grammatical errors (verb tense and incorrect word usage) that could be easily fixed.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2008 11:50 AM Title: The Art of Deceiving
Date: 18 Mar 2008 11:50 AM Title: The Art of Deceiving
Don't stop writing, I'd really like to see where you're going with this story..
The character Neil is something new and different to read about. Everything's so interesting, I can't wait to see Alec's reaction to seeing Neil again... Will it be a good/bad one..?
All I'm trying to say is.. DO NOT STOP WRITING!