


[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2013 10:41 AM Title: Lock, Stock & Barrel
lol ok that was a funny endinG!!!!!




[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 07:00 AM Title: Lock, Stock & Barrel
This was great. Nice fluffy piece and Dix rocks! I can just imagine him changing his bet - in fact, I love that they were betting at all :P Great job ;D




[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2008 09:13 PM Title: Lock, Stock & Barrel
I LOVED YOUR STORY IT WAS BEAUTIFUL AND EXCITING
YOU HAVE A REAL FLAIR. KEEP WRITING.




[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2008 05:37 PM Title: Lock, Stock & Barrel
i loved your story! it was like listening the real max trying to explain her feeling...




[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2008 10:08 PM Title: Lock, Stock & Barrel
Big ol' goofy smile. Fantastic! I love it even more that Max spoke first. And their inner banter and Max's saying without saying - sounds familiar. The ending - I like to think Dix turned down the volume when he realized what was going on. Save Max embarrassment if she ever did find out, and also his hide!




[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2008 10:34 AM Title: Lock, Stock & Barrel
oops, flicked on the wrong rating...


[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2008 10:31 AM Title: Lock, Stock & Barrel
OMG, loved it! Great writing.