[Report This]Date: 13 May 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
Don't do it girl...you & Alec would NEVER recover.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2016 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
LOL I love Alec!!! i don't blame his attiude one bit....
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2012 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
All I can say is "WOAH" that was just too weird, good but weird.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2009 01:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
I REALLY ENJOYED YOUR STORY IT WAS WONDERFULLY INVENTIVE AND SO EROITC AND SENSUAL. I LOVE EVERYTHING THE STORY AND DIALGOUE. I LOVED BEN AND ALEC AND MAX.
Date: 25 Nov 2008 04:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
WoWsy..! I think you should write a sequel where Sam's there so Max gets a taste of her own medecine or something.. LoL!
I had read a fic similiar to this one, the idea anyways, but in another fandom. But this one was different in its own great way.
Great work!!
Date: 23 Oct 2008 03:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderfully written - Ben's brokenness, Alec's resignation to doing what he needs to in order to keep Max, and Max's self centered confusion (to think she ever called Alec egotistical).
Thanks for writing.
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2008 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow. Really well written. You have Alec's character down perfectly. And, from a reader's perspective, what's better than one Alec? Well, two of course! Awesome job! :D
Date: 10 Mar 2008 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
My heart's pounding with the intensity of it all. Kind of dark twist to Kat's SexxX Club. Very well written though and Alec's thoughts. I feel so pained for him. He's had to endure so much and just the fact that he can write this off as just another thing to get through and forget... he shouldn't have to have... well any of it. You did brilliantly for a first run.
Date: 03 Mar 2008 05:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
love, Love, LOVED it! Awesome job! :D
Date: 29 Feb 2008 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
No way!!! she can't seriously be considering it... I know it sounds hot in theory but seriously even the possibility brings me close to tears... (so on the upside you write really well if you can make your reader cry)
For some reason despite the fact im a girl i always identify more with Alec's emotions rather then Max's and this would just destroy him...
I think maybe its due to the timing... i mean they have already mated... she shouldn't want to be with anyone else...
Author's Response:
Hmmm, I can certainly understand where you're coming from. My biggest dilemma in the next chapter has been trying to work out how Alec will respond. I just keep thinking that his first impulse would be to kill Ben, but then that he would also realise that would mean losing Max, so he's kinda stuck. Two out four of his imagined solutions end in Ben's implied death, while the other two rely on Max making a decision. And at this point they're all a bit drunk on Mole's special brew, so none of them are really thinking clearly. A one night only deal might sound like a way out at this point.
But if enough people don't want me to go there, I'd bow to consensus and see if I couldn't find another way round it...
Date: 28 Feb 2008 09:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
OMG. .... that's all I can think to say ... OMG
Also, I think you just exploded my brain....
OMG.
Author's Response: [Giggles] Hey, I figured the only thing better than Alec, would be two (kinda) Alecs? What can I say ... I'm greedy! Glad you liked...
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2008 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is interesting to say the very least. Nice start. A completely different take on the whole Ben, Alec, Max thinger. You have Alec's character to a 't' with all the smartass remarks. I love it.
Author's Response: I've had a lot of fun thinking up smart-Alec responses! I'm glad you think I got him down right - it's such a blast writing him.
Date: 27 Feb 2008 02:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
who's the guy????????
Author's Response: I'd thought I'd probably made it too obvious! Glad to see the suspense last a little ... but all becomes clear in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing. I didn't realise what a difference it would make!
Date: 27 Feb 2008 09:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh. My. God. THIS is your FIRST fanfic?! $&@#*! I haven't been this hooked on just the first chapter in... months!
More please!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! (grins maniacally, this could be addictive!). I was so anxious, it took me ages to decide to post it. The upside of that is I've been writing in the meantime so I've uploaded part 2 - hope it lives up to expectations!