Date: 17 Feb 2008 06:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. That was so sad. I don't even usually read Alec/Asha fics, but I was still rooting for them until the end. There were a few typing errors that interrupted the flow of the story, but overall, a very good read. I felt both Asha's and Alec's pain at not being able to stay together. And I liked the closing sentence. I hadn't even realized that was the day this all took place on in the story. Good job and see you around!
Date: 12 Feb 2008 06:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh! There's a pairing you don't see too much of anymore. It's defenitely not my otp, but not surpisingly (as it's written by you!) was a very enjoyable read! I loved see dark!Mole as well, it all just seemed so real! And, hey, speaking of your fics, are we to see an update on your wip over at NWP anytime soon? :D
Date: 12 Feb 2008 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow, you weren't kidding when you said it wasn't an average romance, nevertheless it's an awesome story :).
Despite that you know that they're not going to be together in the end; you can't help but wish that there could be another way, if only to spare them the broken hearts.
Great work.
Date: 12 Feb 2008 09:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh! oh! oh! I don't have time to read it now before work, but thank you SOOOO much! :D