Date: 27 May 2013 10:55 AM Title: Mysterious Visions
First I want to give kudos to you because you do tell a real intriguing story that I'm determined to continue to read. You have pulled me in now and I'm getting hooked.
But to give just a little concrit here, I found some words that were mis-spelled or maybe they were just typos, so it makes me wonder if you had a beta reader? If you didn't, I would say you did a superb job otherwise. I'm just itching to correct those mis-spellings though. lol! If you want me to, let me know.
All in all, very well done in the story telling, it now brings a lot of questions that I'm not going to ask until I read more of this. Hope you continue this fic! :)
Date: 30 Aug 2010 03:17 AM Title: Noahs Name
I really liked this story and I think it has a lot of potential. It should definitely be continued.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 05:47 PM Title: Noahs Name
I really liked this story and I think it has a lot of potential. It should definitely be continued.
Date: 25 Feb 2008 04:23 PM Title: True Winchester Reunion and lullabies
I'm so glad you're continuing this fic. I read the first chapters a while back on another site and have been waiting and hoping for more so was very happy when you started posting it here.It's a really cool and unique story - a completely different take on Dean=Alec.LOVED Biggs catching the Winchesters, the 'possessed demon child' workout and Dean threatening the demon. Faced with an enraged Alec I'd disappear too!Oh, and Lydecker as Max's "dad" - LOL. Curious to find out where Noah's name comes from - unusual choice (tho I'm happy to read a fic where they don't have a kid named Ben) and really looking forward to chap 5.
Author's Response: thanks...there will be a story behind noah
Date: 20 Feb 2008 03:57 PM Title: New depths
liked it hope you update soon
Author's Response: it may take me a little while to post the next chapter because right now it's gettin really busy with classes since we are almost done and yeah....
Date: 16 Feb 2008 07:22 AM Title: Devil Arrives
love it hope you update soon!!
Author's Response: i should have the 3rd chapter up here soon....
Date: 16 Feb 2008 07:13 AM Title: Mysterious Visions
good it's a great start and all I really like it
Author's Response: thank you so much i'm glad that you like it
Date: 10 Feb 2008 08:18 PM Title: Devil Arrives
And they meet! I'm so glad we're finally starting to get some more crossover fics here, the category was looking a little sad! I loved the long update, and hope to see more soon! :)
Author's Response:
i like crossover fics....they are fun to write
Date: 10 Feb 2008 05:46 AM Title: Mysterious Visions
This is so intriguing...
You've hooked me - you'd better update now, or I'll find you and shake a new chapter out of you!!
BadCat
(tiny note - be careful about typos, etc...)
Author's Response: I'm wroking on the typos and I'm glad that i hooked you