[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2013 08:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
GREAT ENDING!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2013 09:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
She made the PERFECT choice. No disrespect to Logie but Alec is her equal and excelllent mate. Very cool.
Date: 10 May 2010 05:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
I love this story, are you going to post the sequal to this story from NWP on the site soon?
Date: 14 May 2009 01:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
OH MY GOD!!
*THUD*
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2008 09:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
YOUR STORY WAS HEART WARMING AND EROTIC AND LOVED EVERY MINUTE OF READING IT. PLEASE CONTINUE YOUR VERY TALENTED.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2008 05:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
i enjoyed so much this story! i loved it! the way they expose their feeling and she realizes she loves alec... it was so sweet and adorable... i loved it!!!!!
Date: 26 Mar 2008 04:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
it is so sweet!! REally good.. no freakin awesome work!! i hope you right more. I LOVE how max realizes alec is her perfect match and things are over with Logan.
Date: 16 Mar 2008 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
i thought this story was really good! WOW! the ending is so adorable how max finally relizes she doesn't love logan anymore, but loves alec! really good work!
Date: 02 Feb 2008 07:18 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh I so want it to continue. Just read the whole story yet, so far.
It's really great. You're so giving attention to a lot of details. like that a lot. the dialogues are very believable. And althugh most of the time i can't imagine Alec and Max talking about feelings you made it interesting, believable and not to "sappy". If you know what i mean ^^
So I'm totally eager to read the next chapter soon. I'll deffinetelly stick to this story.
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2008 04:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
And now to wait. Jeez, what a cliffie!
This is great, all of this fic. If it weren't so late at night right now and I wasn't crashing from my sugarhigh I would probably have a whole lot more to say to you. Honestly though, I am sitting on the edge of my seat ready for more. :D
Date: 01 Feb 2008 04:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
I don't think I found a single mistake in this chapter... not that I was looking for any... come on, it's compulsive! :D
You had my blood pumping toward the end of that chapter. Drool. Anway. Just let me pull my head out of the gutter here and hopefully I'll come up with a much more productive review next chapter ;)
Date: 01 Feb 2008 04:04 AM Title: Chapter 6
But he didn't finish his sentence, in his focus on the conversation and planning, he didn't the fallen tree limb in his path down the hill, his foot hit it, and he fell, end over end, and starting rolling down the hill. You missed a ‘see’ “the fallen tree limb”, haha. I pretty much filled in the blank but just a friendly notification as I read through your fic. Last chapter I noticed a couple minor spelling errors. Which weren’t big enough really to take away from the reading, but didn’t get by unnoticed. Still am loving this fic. Don’t confuse my assistance with dissatisfaction with your story, because it most certainly is not.
Date: 01 Feb 2008 03:53 AM Title: Chapter 5
Another thing I forgot to mention in the last review is how big of girl Alec was being. So defensive, to the point where I wanted slap him for Max. Just a reaction of mine.
Max is acting shifty now… hehe. Have I mentioned how fantastic this is yet… if I haven’t know that I think it is truly amusing and enthralling.
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2008 03:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
"In coming" haha. Nice. It is good. I like the direction this fic has taken. A few minor spelling mishaps... Manicore being Manticore and a few others. Still very good though. Very cute and adhering.
Date: 01 Feb 2008 03:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
This was great, really fantastic. Some MA goodness and then some seriousness.
One minor obervation... at the beginning of the chapter there is this bit that is just worded funny. First it says they are going to Max's place then she sighs. And then they've been in the car for two hours. I dunno kind of bothered me... but I got past it, figured I'd share my misinterpretation?
My confusion aside there was enough I didn't misunderstand that I am wholly enjoying this fic.
Date: 01 Feb 2008 03:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hate to say it... but she may have had that one coming. Max was like that all through S2 of DA, so I am always reluctantly relieved when Alec gives her a piece of his mind.
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2008 03:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hehe, what fun it will be… I look forward to reading further into this one.