Reviews For Deliverance
Reviewer: OneBadCat Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2008 04:34 AM Title: Deliverance
Date: 22 Jun 2008 04:34 AM Title: Deliverance
This is amazing. Beautifully written, with great pace, depth - and the emotion... wow, I can really feel Logan's bitterness and anger; totally justified and so realistically portrayed.
Can't wait to read the next chapter, and see where you take them. I'm not expecting instant reconciliation - Max doesn't deserve it yet, she should work for the rewards of forgiveness...
Loving this, thank you
BadCat
Reviewer: Shywr1ter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2008 01:21 AM Title: Profoundly Lacking
Date: 02 Jan 2008 01:21 AM Title: Profoundly Lacking
Yep, this is *still a powerful story waiting for the next installment ... as are a legion of readers. Does posting here mean you've been updating the story, thinking about what's next?
The akwardness and hurt between them is so compelling ... please send us more!