Date: 06 Feb 2011 09:51 PM Title: 1. Guilty (MaxFest)
So, introducing what's happening and how Max ended up in the later installments, is that it? *nods* Gotcha.
Anyway the last bit would have already made quite an impact on its own. I found the the tone and circumstances quite heartbreaking. Nice work.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 09:46 PM Title: 4. Vulnerable (MaxFest)
White's mind/reasoning is such a conundrum.
I love these glimpses into his behavior and the questions they raise immediately thereafter. Makes my M/W loving heart skip a beat and my spine tingle with the possibilities.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 09:41 PM Title: 6. Determined (MaxFest)
Well, well, well. You go Maxie! We like Ray :) Though Alec has some very valid argument/s here...
Date: 06 Feb 2011 09:38 PM Title: 10. Hurt (MaxFest)
As I'm sure you've noticed by now, I'm reading these out of order (in the order of last one added to the site first) so sorry about my wild questions before. Though they still stand b/c from this to that, there is a gap :) leaves me all happy inside
Wow, so how did Ames just appear out of nowhere??? (go on to read and earlier part...)
Date: 06 Feb 2011 09:34 PM Title: 11. Happy (MaxFest)
Well??? What was it? What doesn't he want her to know? He gave her blood, right? Or killed for her or both or more or OMG the possibilities. And he's being all civil and good and *grins* More please!
Author's Response: um... Yeah - my bad... there was supposed to be an Author's Note. I guess I shouldn't edit and post when I'm down with the sickness! I'll get right on that oversight - but you'll have to wait for part 2. Sorry, hon! Thanks for your cheering, though :)
Date: 06 Feb 2011 03:20 PM Title: 10. Hurt (MaxFest)
Evil, evil cliff hanger!
Date: 06 Feb 2011 03:17 PM Title: 9. Protective (MaxFest)
This is good=) I can't wait to see wha the technicolor version looks like. I'm curious about this whole line of stories, hee. Just to clarify though, the Cult, you are talking about the Familiars right?
Date: 30 Jan 2011 07:24 AM Title: 6. Determined (MaxFest)
Of course she is.
*shakes head* Loved the transgenic's bet of furniture throwing on one side and kissing on the other.
Thanks for sharing.
Maia.
Date: 30 Jan 2011 07:19 AM Title: 1. Guilty (MaxFest)
Nice, totally did not see the Ray thing coming. Well done.
Date: 13 Jan 2011 02:15 PM Title: 4. Vulnerable (MaxFest)
Ooo, I look forward to the rest of these=)
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 08:24 PM Title: 1. Guilty (MaxFest)
Awww, that's heartbreaking! :D
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words! There is more (oh, so much more) planned and plotted. Watch this space for a multi-chaptered response :)