Reviews For Falling for the Right Time
Reviewer: Maia Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2010 04:16 PM Title: Falling for the Right Time
Date: 28 Feb 2010 04:16 PM Title: Falling for the Right Time
Interesting story. It was good to read about Mara, to know how she knew 494 and Joshua. And Doc.
I really like that you showed 494's strength through this. How you had him push his memories on her. And I completely understand why she'd not give them back.
Interesting story all around.
Reviewer: Linn Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2008 03:01 PM Title: Falling for the Right Time
Date: 16 Mar 2008 03:01 PM Title: Falling for the Right Time
This is well written and takes its time to show actual character developement. I can only recomment you to read it, it is definitely worth the time!