Date: 28 Feb 2010 09:18 PM Title: On the Edge
oooh, SO good.
I really, really like what you did here. It was funny and light and then a bit scary. But you made her strong. And even better, you made him stronger.
It's like, no matter what strange new abilities she gains, he's always there and one step ahead. I love that. She's not alone, and he's good all on his own. Perfect.