Date: 27 May 2010 08:20 PM Title: Fingerprints
0_o Very nice. I've never really considdered this scenerio before.
Date: 26 May 2010 01:12 PM Title: Fingerprints
Huh. Really interesting. Of course, I want to know more, but at the same time, I don't. It's great as is.
Thanks for this!
Maia.
Date: 26 May 2010 01:10 PM Title: Johnny Kick A Hole In The Sky
oooh, nicely done.
You did great with the characterization, it was aparent from the first few words. And it's a great explanation.
Nice job!
Maia.
Date: 20 May 2010 01:42 AM Title: Johnny Kick A Hole In The Sky
nice outtake! kinda love it!
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2010 09:27 PM Title: Johnny Kick A Hole In The Sky
What a great idea, making use of the loss of information for starting out life new! Such an 'Ames' thing to do if you asked me - and he probably wasn't the only one to pull this stunt...
I also really adore your characterization, OBC. Not only of White's but also of the other people around him.
Imaginative background story.
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2010 08:06 PM Title: Fingerprints
Wow, this sent shivers down my back, OBC.
Interesting theory, too by the way. Taking into account the things a desperate and grieving parent might do in desperate times, it is indeed conclusive.
Date: 10 May 2010 04:30 AM Title: Fingerprints
Oh. Wow. Um. Golly Gee Whiz!
Talk about a punch to the gut. I never considered that - and why not? Human is human, special breeding aside, the child was just as vulnuerable as any other. Grief can do a number on a person, but wow.
(Also makes you wonder if Sandeman practically lived at the lab for his wife to tell him such awful news over the phone...)
Huh. Amesy as a Transgenic hybrid. Could also serve to explain how Max and co. managed to thwart him. He wasn't surerior, really.
I'm so curious to find out what inspired you (over breakfast!)
Author's Response: I had been puzzling for two months over who could be swapped and how to go Transgenic or Familiar - considering that barcodes are encoded into their DNA. Except not all of them do - Joshua was first. But First what? What if there were other firsts, without barcodes... And so I saw Sandeman, at his desk, with a file; and wondered how to get the Transgenic out of the lab. And it simply came together. I can’t take credit for consciously working it out - I just saw it, fully formed. I love my brain!
Date: 08 May 2010 12:02 AM Title: Johnny Kick A Hole In The Sky
Another wonderful story=) And now my muse is making me feel guilty for not submitting anything for so long...
Author's Response: Aww, don't feel guilty, Muse - feel inspired! (hopefully to finish Intriguing Situation...) Thanks for your review, hope to see you writing again soon.
Date: 07 May 2010 08:19 AM Title: Johnny Kick A Hole In The Sky
Oh that was brilliant! What an awesome cover for a man desperate to shed his past. I hadn't ever really thought about the positie side of the Pulse.
Nicely done, hon! *smishes you*
Author's Response: Thanks sweetie! I've always wondered how Ames dropped the Sandeman bit. As soon as I saw this challenge, I could picture the scene so clearly, I *had* to write it.
So you're going to bug me for background stories, huh? You keep sending the prompts, and I'll keep (trying!) to write them!!