[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2010 05:01 AM Title: Damage Done
Great fic. Seems very familiar. Have you posted it somewhere before? Probably read it there. Still, as before, I thought it was great and an awesome insight into Adam's life. I love reading about what happens to him after he goes with Buddy :D
Author's Response: Why, thank you so much for the praise, Skylar. I really appreciate your taking the time to read and also review.
The question about what happened with Zack/Adam after he left his previous life behind for good intrigued me very much too. So much so, that I finally began to try my hand at making up my own version. His character fascinated me from the first appearance he made on the show - and never left off.
About coming across his story somewhere else, I posted it on my ff.net account as well, that's true but only after I put it up here yesterday. In fact, I only finished writing a couple of hours before submitting it for the SummerSizzler Challenge.
But then, maybe it was another fic with a similar point to start from, who knows.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 05:44 PM Title: Damage Done
Wow. And you were worried about writing this? *shakes head*
Nicely done, sweets! I love the way his flashbacks crept in, the struggle and frustration he felt. The shocking and realistic acknowledgments that Mary was a beautiful woman, and his self control in dealing with the rising emotions.
Reintroducing White was a nice twist. Leant the ending an air of uncertainty and planted a seed of hope that you'll have yet another follow-up piece or three :) I can see this becoming a full fledged series. Would you indulge me, pretty, pretty please? I'm partial to Zack stories if you didn't know :P
Great job, Twinch! *hugs you tight* Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you so very, very much, Shay sweety!
I "had" to rewatch a ton of Zack episodes from season one [I know, what a chore! ;-) ] in order to try and get him right; his strong mind and how he might react to such a disturbing situation. Plus, I couldn't, for the life of me, remember the names of Buddy and Mary until I dug out "Some Assembly Required" somewhere online. hehe
White... *evil laugh* I was pondering until the very moment I posted whether I should list him with the characters to begin with, lest I spoil the surprise.
And yes, rest assured, Shay, I am SO going to make this a series (if only I knew how to correct the setting for the two stories into "series: yes" *dramatic sigh*). I've already got a title (still a secret, of course) and a story outline for the next installment. *rubs hands in glee*
So, just in case you haven't notices yet, I'm right there in line with you concerning Zack... and strangely as well with OBC about White as of late.
Date: 30 Apr 2009 09:37 AM Title: Collateral Damage
Love. Love. Love. Ames White is at his best when he's mad :) Okay, maybe nto his best, but his sexiest? No, that would be when he's sneering and snarking. Hmmm. Well, let's just say that he looks damn good when he's angry and that it works for him - and for me! *grins*
I totally hope that this is open-ended so that you can give us that second meeting.
Nicely done, hon. Great use of the prompt/s. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: I know what you mean, Shay... Ames White is in deed something spectacular to behold when he's angry. Works for me as well - hence the story, I guess. LOL
Thank you so very much for the sweet and encouraging review. I'll consider turning this into a series (or adding a second encounter at least) most definitely.
Date: 24 Apr 2009 01:55 PM Title: Collateral Damage
Oh this is just fantastic!! Ames White, pissed off and stranded - saved by a Transgenic Samaritan. Who doesn't even know he is special!!
You did good, kid. (patrony not intended...) :P
Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the awesome review, OneBadCat, it means the world to me. I really enjoyed writing this, especially Ames White. :-D