Date: 19 Dec 2007 09:17 AM Title: 5 am Musings
Lovely character study - on X5's. Well done - and it's only your first fic? Keep it up!!
Get a Beta to check your grammar - there are a few inconsistencies, you could get it looking great .
(and who is 678 - I keep seeing the number around but I just can't place it...)
BadCat
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it.
Sorry for the grammar, for the time being I corrected some of the mistakes. However, getting a Beta is on my to do list before I think of placing anything else for public reading :) .
And about 678 designation, she's part of the alternative universe swirling in my head, which will make a lot more sense in the following story (my original idea was to have a character study for the three main characters).
thanks for taking time to review it.