This was cute. And a nice little insight into Alec's whole persona.

Thanks for sharing.

Wow.

I loved this one… you writers are making this voting for my favorite prompt challenge… an um ‘challenge’? Well even if I don’t choose this one you should know it would be a definite close second. That was great. I really liked it. Made me think, not that I don’t do that always. It made me contemplate on the ambivalent a little more when it comes to Alec.

I really wish I could come up with something better than just that for my review of this story, because I feel like I have so much more to say about it. You’ve left me stumbling over my expressions and at a loss of vocal arrangement. It was great though, really. I enjoyed it immensely.

Oooh, I really liked this. The fact that for once Max actually looks at Alec and sees him, even if just for a split second, rather than the jerk she expects to see and sees because that's exactly what she expects. It's a nice lead in to revelations later in the season, when Max and Alec do finally connect.

There are a few places where the punctuation of dialogue is incorrect - I run archives and it's an incredibly common error - so it might be something you want a beta reader to look at. For example:

“Yeah,” She [should be 'she' as this is a dialogue tag and part of the same sentence as the dialogue, so you don't use a capital letter] said evenly

But other than that, I really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thank you! And I've actually been told that before, I just don't.... always remember. Heh. I'll keep an eye on it from now on. Thanks again!