Date: 04 Feb 2009 04:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was great, really well done. I particularly like the childrens' names. Very clever, and very cute.
Great work.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review it is allways nice to hear that somone likes me story. glad you liked the names i know max is very family orientated so their names would be in there some where. thanks again!
Date: 26 Mar 2008 03:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved this it is very well written :)
Author's Response: thank you it was my first story so it is good to hear that people like it
Date: 06 Dec 2007 03:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great first fic - nice little summary of their future. It's always hardest to put your first one out there! Maybe ask a Beta reader to keep an eye on your spelling and formatting. But hope you continue writing.
Welcome to this community!
BadCat
Author's Response: thank you for your review it allways helps to get feed back your right it is hard putting your first out there i was so nervous i didnt think anyone would like it so thankyou again for reviewing much appriciated
Date: 28 Nov 2007 06:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Not bad at all. It felt a little rushed, but I liked what I saw. And this is my inner English tutor coming to the surface, but I saw a few grammatical errors. Nothing major, like "granted" in first paragraph and such. Overall, good job!
Author's Response: thank you for your review it was my first ever fan fic and it makes me happy to know people like my ideas thank you again for reviewing and i'll try to iimprove my grammer in future stories
Date: 25 Nov 2007 05:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hey Akka! Just wanted to welcome you as our newest author, and let you know I really enjoyed reading your fic! It's short, but poignant. Hope to hear more from you soon! :)
-Cc
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. it was my first ever fan fic and i am working on another idea but it still needs alot of work. Hopefully it shouldn't be to long in the making. Once again thanks for the review. :-)