Date: 25 Jul 2011 07:22 PM Title: Chapter 20: El Tango de Ronald
Great story! Love to see more of it. I'd like to see what happens when the key players finally have their cards on the table. How will Sam and Max react when they realize how Alec relates to them? Hope to you get a little inspiration for this fic!
Date: 14 Sep 2010 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 : Starting Over
WOOOOO...NEED MORE!
Hey, I started reading this on Gumboot Mafia...yay to find it again! But no more was added...I LOVE this story, hope you can update soon...
I really do enjoy this story, incase you hadn't noticed. Please keep going when you can! xx
Date: 01 Jun 2010 03:15 PM Title: Chapter 20: El Tango de Ronald
what happened to alec? i'm dying to know!
more please!
Date: 20 Mar 2010 09:55 AM Title: Chapter 20: El Tango de Ronald
Hee. This is a great story. Very funny, and I like how the different characters are made to appear in the weirdest of circumstances.
Made me laugh at several points, and I adore Alec-the-escort-that-really-isn't.
But I hope you guys will continue this. I need to know what the heck is keeping Alec away. And how the story will end.
Thanks for sharing and start posting more of this!
Maia
Date: 28 Dec 2009 03:08 PM Title: Chapter 20: El Tango de Ronald
Please update soon. I can't wait to see what Max does to Alec for not coming with her.
Author's Response: We'll do our best not to disappoint you! Your continued patience is greatly appreciated.
Date: 25 Jun 2009 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 : Starting Over
Hey there!
Awww, your fanfic is amazing! I'm at chapter uh... 13 I guess and I can't stop reading. ;D So much Alec and Max! Yay! :D And Alec to the rescue!! Weeeh! But I stumbled over somthing that made me really sad. "Nazi Germany"? *sigh* Well, you could call us like that tens of years ago, but not any more. And believe me, we are not proud of our history, but calling us Nazis these days?! We are not Nazis!!! :(
Author's Response:
We've been really lax on responding to reviews, and for this I apologize.
Firstly, thank you for reading and commenting. We're really glad you're enjoying the fic!
I'd just like to point something out. By refering to something as 'Nazi Germany' in no way did we infer that the country or people are such at the current time. It was meant to imply a comparison to that time in history. Please don't take things so literally - we would never set out to offend or insult others, least of all in such a public manner. We are sorry if you were offended but that wasn't our intention.
Date: 28 Apr 2009 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 20: El Tango de Ronald
Thank you for updating! I love this story and couldn't stop laughing at Max in shop and Sam/Normal's tango dance. Priceless!
I'm also wondering about Alec and his secrative behavior. hum....very intriguing.
Thank you and please update this and Deceptions soon.
:D
Date: 26 Apr 2009 06:40 PM Title: Chapter 20: El Tango de Ronald
I'M SO GLAD YOUR FEELING BETTER AND I LOVE YOUR NEW CHAPTER AND CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE. ALSO, AMES AND NORMAL DANCING PRICLESS. I COULDN'T STOP LAUGHING. PLEASE CONTINUE. MAY GOD BLESS YOU. YOU HAVE REAL TALENT WITH YOUR WRITING.
Date: 10 Feb 2009 05:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 : Starting Over
ALTHOUGH IT TOOK ME MOMENT TO GET USED TO AU. I LOVE YOU CHARACTER AND STORY. PLEASE COMPLETE CAN'T WAIT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN. YOUR GREAT.
Date: 17 Dec 2008 01:06 PM Title: Chapter 19 - A Little Spark Of Madness
Please please please update! I remember reading this orginally and wondering if it would ever get finished. I'm so glad your taking it up again! Brilliant writing and I'm loving the characters please keep it up!!!
Date: 23 Oct 2008 03:13 PM Title: Chapter 1 : Starting Over
I'm generally not a huge fan of such complete AU works, as I sometimes find it difficult to not bring the baggage of the show to reading fan fiction. This piece, however, manages to keep the characters true to their roots while altering the reality around them in an interesting and compelling plot. I was happy to see a recent update to this story, and will definitely be taking the time to re-read it in its entirety now that there is the promise of it being continued to its conclusion. I am interested to see how Max and Alec discover each other as transgenics, as well as intrigued by the addition of Zack (I'm assuming) as Sam to the sotry line in the more recent chapters.The two of you colloborate well together. The writing is of a consistent style and the transition between authors thus far has been seamless.Appreciatively - Heather
Date: 07 Sep 2008 02:20 AM Title: Chapter 19 - A Little Spark Of Madness
Yay!! You're back!! And the new installment is brilliant!!
They would so behave *exactly* like this - Max all denial, and Alec secretly protective.
Now I'll have to go and re-read the rest - I live such a hard life!
Date: 07 Sep 2008 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 19 - A Little Spark Of Madness
yay!!! im SO glad you started writing again!! i love this story!!!
Date: 18 Feb 2008 05:33 PM Title: Chapter 18: Back Away Slowly; No Sudden Movements
Can't wait to read more. Hope you continue.
Author's Response: Wow, we've really been lax on the responses...much like with the updates. Apologies! Hope to fix that soon! (*grins* i can see again! :D yay!) and the next chapter is in the works! So, bear with us and keep reading and we'll do our darnedest to deliver quickly, deal? Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 21 Jan 2008 02:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 : Starting Over
Hmm this is an interesting start to a fic... I've just started reading this one... but I'm sure that is quite obvious... anyways... I'm gonna read some more into this, likely leave a linear of reviews on the warpath, expressing my deep impatient guise to proceed.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2008 02:36 PM Title: Chapter 17: Apply Pressure and Squeeze
Asha the receptionist?!?! Haha, that’s great. I don’t like Asha much… glad you added that in. I like to make fun of her whatever chance I get, along with Logan.
"Normal stared in slack-jawed disbelief. This list of demands was…criminal, highway robbery! “Why not throw in my first born, while you’re at it?” he muttered dryly"— Seems that Normal is getting a taste of his own medicine huh?
Damn that Eyes only... hehe. Glad we got some of that MA action, I think the reader's were needing it. Maybe it was just me >.< hehe. I'm so happy for the (seemingly) quick update! Nice work, both of you. This one's still at the top of my list of favs.
Before you get me started... no I do not have a life... hehe. I am totally sick today, I'd much rather be reviewing than wasting it lying in bed, besides you guys are totally worth it.
Date: 21 Jan 2008 02:33 PM Title: Chapter 16: Man On A Mission
It was totally worth the wait guys, no complaints here. Loved the carelessness with the names, quite humorous if I do say so myself. It was all great though, who am I kidding? It’s about time Gammo got some of that menacing Alec :D I don’t know if I mentioned it, but I found Mr. Austin Powers quite comical as well, definitely not the way anyone could anticipate White being.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2008 02:32 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Hacker's a Cracker
Not much Alec in that chapter... aww... I suppose though that there was more of him than Max knows :D Zachy's still out there then huh? He sounds as pessimistic as usual hehe. He has some different values in life and mostly that is what I was attracted to in the tid bits of the episodes of DA we saw him in. He is pretty much atypical period; when it comes to his personality within the series.
I was totally expecting Logan when ‘eyes only’ was brought up and then smacked myself in the forehead only moments after remembering that he was already a man-** earlier... then I was just plain curious to know who this new 'eyes-only' dude was. A homosexual?!?! hehe! You guys had me giggling my pants off.
That was a great chap!
Date: 21 Jan 2008 02:32 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Prey For The Hunter
I always love reading this fic, so, so very TOO much!
Alec's gonna go beat up some Gammo huh? This is bound to ignite my interest further... you just love keeping me impatient don't you guys? Does Max finally make it to that spot in the ad? Gosh I cannot even wait! Don't leave me hanging too long! Pwetty pwease...
Date: 21 Jan 2008 02:31 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Name That Feeling
You shouldn't be suprised when I say I love this story so very much... really you guys just shouldn't! I love it! It's fantastic! Keeps me guessing, amused and gleeful all at once. Can't wait for another update! Really I just can't I'm on the edge of my seat! :D Keep up the wonderful work.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2008 02:31 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Somebody's Bitch
"I told you you'd thank me." Hehe, you just had me grinnin down to the last sentence! My goodness, I loved this, so so much. :D So the greatest fic I can think of right now.
Date: 21 Jan 2008 02:30 PM Title: Chapter 11 : The Naked Truth
Wow that update was soon... or maybe I am severely behind... either way I'm glad... that was freakin' awesome!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2008 02:30 PM Title: Chapter 10 : Bastards and Bedfellows
Because men only have enough blood to run one brain at once.
Geez Laura's a hoot.
This chapter was astounding! Loved it! I'm so glad you guys are back on with the writing, because even though I've only just found this fic it's become one of my favs!
Date: 21 Jan 2008 02:29 PM Title: Chapter 9 : The Player and His Game
Rafer's so full of himself... I'm disgusted. So I guess that's a "Good Job" you. ;)
Date: 21 Jan 2008 02:29 PM Title: Chapter 8 : Frustrations
Both of them are shamelessly daydreaming about one another... that can only mean one thing... right?