Date: 30 Jan 2011 07:11 AM Title: One More Dream
Hee. Nice little series. I liked all three chapters. The first would be my favourite, very very steamy. But the rest are nice aditions.
One little comment only, on the second one, it's Max's dream but you switch to Ames' POV (or at least, describe how he's feeling). It would probably support the "dream" part of it more if it were completely her POV. Again, just a detail I thought to point out, it does not detract from the enjoyment :)
Maia.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 01:25 PM Title: Another Dream
and of course you had to leave it there, didn't you?
i've come to recognize the pattern of torture.
OW.
Date: 24 Mar 2008 03:28 AM Title: Another Dream
Thank you! =) I just love this story=D
Author's Response: Giggles, glad I could help - you made my day; that deserves repayment!
Date: 16 Feb 2008 06:57 PM Title: Dreaming
I read the rest of this on Fanfiction.net and was wondering why you haven't posted the rest here. It's a great story with a build-up.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I was pondering writing a RH exclusive for the 'Interlude' chapter, so holding off posting the rest until I get my ass in gear.rnOf course, if someone were to give me a nudge... (wink!)