Date: 04 Mar 2008 08:42 PM Title: I Never Knew
A little wishy washy in the character dialogue at times but you captured a wonderful and romantic sentiment throughout your story. I enjoyed reading it. Makes me wish there had've been a third season of DA so we could have enjoyed all that Max and Alec could've been (sigh!). Thanks!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2007 01:04 PM Title: I Never Knew
BIG SMILE!
Love it. Just love it.
Torturing Alec by making him wait and then of course - what else!! - it takes a bullet for her to realise.
My heart just stopped when I read that and then the line: Ssshh I'm sleeping is just so Alec.
Love it.
Author's Response: Thanks! Max always does seem to need a bullet or two to get her head on straight...
Date: 16 Oct 2007 03:43 PM Title: I Never Knew
See above!
I'd love to read this - cool premise and all; but it desperately needs formatting.
Regards, BadCat
Date: 14 Oct 2007 12:51 PM Title: I Never Knew
have u noticed the way the storie looks on the webpage? it is impossible to read it when it is written without any breakes what so ever.